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The Revolving Cycle by ~SnowyHail:iconSnowyHail:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Family Life > Ballad


Unable to speak, unable to shout
The words stay suppressed, not coming out
These shackles of hopes that chain my heart
Are squeezing me tighter, tearing me apart
The air is suffocating, it's harder to breathe
With all of these dreams that won't leave me be
Chained in the dungeon called a safe, loving home
Where, although they are here, I'm always alone
I can't look at them, a part of me dies
Whenever I look at those bright, hopeful eyes
There are no doors in these solid walls
The only way out is for me to fall
But as I fall, and leave this place
Another one comes and takes my place
The wretched guilt, she's unable to shout,
Words held suppressed, no longer let out
The guilt as I watch one suffer for me
And the guilt of joy, I'm finally free
©2008-2009 ~SnowyHail
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Author's Comments

Yes, the title does have something to do with the poem

._.
I wrote this after watching Gokusen.
I kinda guess this is what Shin would feel like.
Or Sano, from Hana-Kimi.
Except, they're both too good of guys to actually feel happy about leaving.

._.

Okay.
Don't listen to me. I'm not making any sense.

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~SnowyHail May 28, 2008, 4:45:29 PM
ah.. ddenk kyooo

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The world is full of stupid people.
All I can do to survive is to not become one of them.
--
[link] <- THIS PERSON MAKES THE CUTEST PIXEL AVIES!!! Go worship her. ._.
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~Minimucchi May 28, 2008, 4:53:40 PM
Emotionally, I felt that part there...Because, fairly enough it isn't easy to be replaced but people can do it so rashly ._.

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HURHURHUR
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~SnowyHail May 28, 2008, 5:08:51 PM
oh, he's happy he was replaced, though
he's happy to be out of there

--
The world is full of stupid people.
All I can do to survive is to not become one of them.
--
[link] <- THIS PERSON MAKES THE CUTEST PIXEL AVIES!!! Go worship her. ._.
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~GrasshoneyZ May 28, 2008, 5:13:27 PM
omg. ur so good.
this poem is amazing.

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grasshoneyz is my name!

my avie is made by the awesome ~cremecake
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~SnowyHail May 28, 2008, 5:55:17 PM
thank you :)

--
The world is full of stupid people.
All I can do to survive is to not become one of them.
--
[link] <- THIS PERSON MAKES THE CUTEST PIXEL AVIES!!! Go worship her. ._.
:icongrasshoneyz:
~GrasshoneyZ May 28, 2008, 5:56:16 PM
=] yoz welcome

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grasshoneyz is my name!

my avie is made by the awesome ~cremecake
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~znas May 29, 2008, 1:09:14 AM
Well... cant really sawy why it just does.. OOOH!!! you changed your avie!!!

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No znaS and sanZ are one ^__^
I just like to think with both prespectives
Znas is innately good
while Sanz is innately misundestood.
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~SnowyHail May 29, 2008, 2:32:08 PM
jes!
creme made it~~

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There's no place like 127.0.0.1
:)
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~znas May 30, 2008, 1:20:21 AM
Heheheh yeah too bad she cant take anymore request TT__TT

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No znaS and sanZ are one ^__^
I just like to think with both prespectives
Znas is innately good
while Sanz is innately misundestood.
:iconsnowyhail:
~SnowyHail May 30, 2008, 9:26:45 PM
:)
as soon as the load of requests she has now is off, i'm sure she'll take more requests...

TT___TT
but she won't sell them, no matter how we try to convince her...
she could get rich, you know?

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There's no place like 127.0.0.1
:)
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