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The Revolving Cycle by ~SnowyHail:iconSnowyHail:



Unable to speak, unable to shout
The words stay suppressed, not coming out
These shackles of hopes that chain my heart
Are squeezing me tighter, tearing me apart
The air is suffocating, it's harder to breathe
With all of these dreams that won't leave me be
Chained in the dungeon called a safe, loving home
Where, although they are here, I'm always alone
I can't look at them, a part of me dies
Whenever I look at those bright, hopeful eyes
There are no doors in these solid walls
The only way out is for me to fall
But as I fall, and leave this place
Another one comes and takes my place
The wretched guilt, she's unable to shout,
Words held suppressed, no longer let out
The guilt as I watch one suffer for me
And the guilt of joy, I'm finally free
©2008-2009 ~SnowyHail
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Author's Comments

Yes, the title does have something to do with the poem

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I wrote this after watching Gokusen.
I kinda guess this is what Shin would feel like.
Or Sano, from Hana-Kimi.
Except, they're both too good of guys to actually feel happy about leaving.

._.

Okay.
Don't listen to me. I'm not making any sense.

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:iconznas:
reading this poem kinda reminds me of Xegabelir...

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No znaS and sanZ are one ^__^
I just like to think with both prespectives
Znas is innately good
while Sanz is innately misundestood.
:iconminimucchi:
Oh my the replacement part really got me there D:

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HURHURHUR
:iconcremecake:
ooh. nice. :]

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bangbang!
:iconif-love-was-blue:
awwwwww i loves it!

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Din, with her strong flaming arms, cultivated the land to create the earth.
:iconsnowyhail:
how comes?

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The world is full of stupid people.
All I can do to survive is to not become one of them.
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[link] <- THIS PERSON MAKES THE CUTEST PIXEL AVIES!!! Go worship her. ._.
:iconsnowyhail:
got you?
in what way?

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The world is full of stupid people.
All I can do to survive is to not become one of them.
--
[link] <- THIS PERSON MAKES THE CUTEST PIXEL AVIES!!! Go worship her. ._.
:iconsnowyhail:
thanks :)

--
The world is full of stupid people.
All I can do to survive is to not become one of them.
--
[link] <- THIS PERSON MAKES THE CUTEST PIXEL AVIES!!! Go worship her. ._.
:iconsnowyhail:
thanks yous!

--
The world is full of stupid people.
All I can do to survive is to not become one of them.
--
[link] <- THIS PERSON MAKES THE CUTEST PIXEL AVIES!!! Go worship her. ._.

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